[DC-Trade] Proposal for Dynamic Coalition document on trade transparency

[Jeremy Malcolm]

On 10/8/17 9:29 pm, parminder wrote:
>>
>>   * Countries should make trade advisory bodies and implementation
>>     bodies more balanced by taking proactive steps to include more
>>     diverse stakeholders such as representatives of Internet users,
>>     consumer organizations, and experts in human rights and development.
>>
>
> Could it be
>
> Countries should make trade advisory bodies and implementation bodies
> more balanced by taking proactive steps to include more diverse
> stakeholders such as representatives of Internet users, and
> organisations working in the areas of human rights, development, and
> consumer issues.
>
> BTW, not clear about what "implementation bodies" means above, but can
> live with it ...

Implementation bodies can be taken out I think, it's ambiguous.

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