[DC-Trade] Proposal for Dynamic Coalition document on trade transparency

[Estelle Masse]

Hi everyone,

Thanks a lot for the hard work on this, Jeremy!

I have left a couple of comments/suggestions in the document which is in
good shape I think.

Best,

Estelle.

On Fri, Aug 11, 2017 at 6:11 PM, Jeremy Malcolm <jmalcolm at eff.org> wrote:

> On 10/8/17 9:29 pm, parminder wrote:
>
>
>    - Countries should make trade advisory bodies and implementation
>    bodies more balanced by taking proactive steps to include more diverse
>    stakeholders such as representatives of Internet users, consumer
>    organizations, and experts in human rights and development.
>
>
> Could it be
>
> Countries should make trade advisory bodies and implementation bodies more
> balanced by taking proactive steps to include more diverse stakeholders
> such as representatives of Internet users, and organisations working in the
> areas of human rights, development, and consumer issues.
>
> BTW, not clear about what "implementation bodies" means above, but can
> live with it ...
>
>
> Implementation bodies can be taken out I think, it's ambiguous.
>
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