[DC-Trade] Proposal for Dynamic Coalition document on trade transparency

[David Snead]

That works for me.

David Snead
Board Chair, Chair Public Policy Working Group, Co-founder
Internet Infrastructure Coalition / I2Coalition
i2Coalition.com

On Thu, Aug 10, 2017 at 10:29 PM, parminder <parminder at itforchange.net>
wrote:

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> On Friday 11 August 2017 05:31 AM, Jeremy Malcolm wrote:
>
> snip
> We have lost the word "balanced" and gained a second bullet point that
> David (who should know because he has served on a Trade Advisory Committee)
> finds problematic.  Since we already have a paragraph about opening up
> proposals to a notice and comment and public hearing process, I suggest we
> lose the second bullet point above and return to a single paragraph which
> would focus on stakeholder inclusion, saying:
>
>    - Countries should make trade advisory bodies and implementation
>    bodies more balanced by taking proactive steps to include more diverse
>    stakeholders such as representatives of Internet users, consumer
>    organizations, and experts in human rights and development.
>
>
> Could it be
>
> Countries should make trade advisory bodies and implementation bodies more
> balanced by taking proactive steps to include more diverse stakeholders
> such as representatives of Internet users, and organisations working in the
> areas of human rights, development, and consumer issues.
>
> BTW, not clear about what "implementation bodies" means above, but can
> live with it ...
>
> parminder
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> Does that sound any better?
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