<!DOCTYPE html PUBLIC "-//W3C//DTD XHTML 1.0 Strict//EN" "http://www.w3.org/TR/xhtml1/DTD/xhtml1-strict.dtd"><html xmlns="http://www.w3.org/1999/xhtml"><head>
<meta http-equiv="Content-Type" content="text/html; charset=UTF-8" /></head><body>
<p>Some thoughts on this mock-up, Jeremy,</p>
<p>1. The main subject is "intermediate liability", not the random fact that they are being launched in the city of Manila. As such, the words "Intermediate Liability" should be at least the same size as "Manila Principles" - the whole heading should be the same type size.</p>
<p>2. "Intermediate Liability" should be defined asap - perhaps with a short expansion of the term right under the title, and then a longer one in the introduction. This is what we currently have in version 0.9<br /></p>
<p>3. There should be a "shortest form" of the principles - the text could start with the six current principles, each listed as a heading only. This list could function as a table of contents, linked to the expansion in the full text of the principles beneath.<br /></p>
<p>4. Otherwise, I like the design and style.</p>
<p>Best,</p>
<p>Chris<br /></p>
<p><br /></p>
<blockquote type="cite">
On January 16, 2015 at 7:35 PM Jeremy Malcolm <jmalcolm@eff.org> wrote:
<br />
<br /> Please find attached a mockup of what will become the Manila Principles website at
<a class="moz-txt-link-freetext" href="https://www.manilaprinciples.org">https://www.manilaprinciples.org</a>, to be launched at the meeting in Manila. Of course the content is more important than the presentation, and the content of the mockup is currently nonsense, but we'll of course replace it with the Principles when they are done.
<br />
<br /> As you can see, the major text of each principle is shown in bold. The bullet points underneath it and the "Read more, Tweet, XXXX" buttons will drop down after you click the little down-arrow triangle; otherwise they are hidden. The "Read more" jumps you to the relevant part of the background paper, probably as a PDF. The "Tweet" link composes a draft tweet about that section of the Principles if you are logged into Twitter. "XXXX" will probably eventually read "Discuss" and will jump to the (this) mailing list subscription page.
<br />
<br /> Up the top, "Principles" and "Signatories" are in-page links, but "Learn more" will expose both the background paper and also the other resources that we'll be hosting on the site including jurisdictional analysis and, really, anything that we want to put there concerning intermediaries. "Language" will switch the website to a translated version of the principles in various languages (but we will not translate not the other materials).
<br />
<br /> Your comments on the draft are very welcome.
<br />
<br />
<img id="part1.01030405.03070703@eff.org" height="1297" alt="Manila Principles website mockup" width="800" src="cid:part1.01030405.03070703@eff.org" />
<br />
<pre class="moz-signature">-- Jeremy MalcolmSenior Global Policy AnalystElectronic Frontier Foundation<a class="moz-txt-link-freetext" href="https://eff.org">https://eff.org</a><a class="moz-txt-link-abbreviated" href="mailto:jmalcolm@eff.org">jmalcolm@eff.org</a>Tel: 415.436.9333 ext 161:: Defending Your Rights in the Digital World ::</pre>
</blockquote>
<p><br /> </p>
<blockquote type="cite">
_______________________________________________
<br />ManilaPrinciples mailing list
<br />ManilaPrinciples@eff.org
<br />https://lists.eff.org/mailman/listinfo/manilaprinciples
</blockquote>
<p><br /> </p>
</body></html>