<div dir="ltr"><div><div><div><div>Hi everyone,<br><br></div>Thanks a lot for the hard work on this, Jeremy!<br><br></div>I have left a couple of comments/suggestions in the document which is in good shape I think.<br><br></div>Best,<br><br></div>Estelle.<br></div><div class="gmail_extra"><br><div class="gmail_quote">On Fri, Aug 11, 2017 at 6:11 PM, Jeremy Malcolm <span dir="ltr"><<a href="mailto:jmalcolm@eff.org" target="_blank">jmalcolm@eff.org</a>></span> wrote:<br><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex">
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On 10/8/17 9:29 pm, parminder wrote:<br>
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<li>Countries should make trade advisory bodies and
implementation bodies more balanced by taking proactive
steps to include more diverse stakeholders such as
representatives of Internet users, consumer organizations,
and experts in human rights and development.</li>
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Could it be<br>
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Countries should make trade advisory bodies and implementation
bodies more balanced by taking proactive steps to include more
diverse stakeholders such as representatives of Internet users,
and organisations working in the areas of human rights,
development, and consumer issues. <br>
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BTW, not clear about what "implementation bodies" means above, but
can live with it ...<br>
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Implementation bodies can be taken out I think, it's ambiguous.<span class=""><br>
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