<div dir="ltr">That works for me.</div><div class="gmail_extra"><br clear="all"><div><div class="gmail_signature" data-smartmail="gmail_signature"><div dir="ltr"><div><div dir="ltr"><div><div><div>David Snead<br></div>Board Chair, Chair Public Policy Working Group, Co-founder</div>Internet Infrastructure Coalition / I2Coalition<br></div>i2Coalition.com<br></div></div></div></div></div>
<br><div class="gmail_quote">On Thu, Aug 10, 2017 at 10:29 PM, parminder <span dir="ltr"><<a href="mailto:parminder@itforchange.net" target="_blank">parminder@itforchange.net</a>></span> wrote:<br><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex">
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<div class="m_2540657015736046306moz-cite-prefix">On Friday 11 August 2017 05:31 AM,
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We have lost the word "balanced" and gained a second bullet point
that David (who should know because he has served on a Trade
Advisory Committee) finds problematic. Since we already have a
paragraph about opening up proposals to a notice and comment and
public hearing process, I suggest we lose the second bullet point
above and return to a single paragraph which would focus on
stakeholder inclusion, saying:<br>
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<li>Countries should make trade advisory bodies and
implementation bodies more balanced by taking proactive steps
to include more diverse stakeholders such as representatives
of Internet users, consumer organizations, and experts in
human rights and development.</li>
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Could it be<br>
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Countries should make trade advisory bodies and implementation
bodies more balanced by taking proactive steps to include more
diverse stakeholders such as representatives of Internet users, and
organisations working in the areas of human rights, development, and
consumer issues. <br>
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BTW, not clear about what "implementation bodies" means above, but
can live with it ...<br>
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parminder <br>
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<p>Does that sound any better?<br>
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